Please check and correct my diary. ↓↓↓ And not cold, even in winter, or rather I could say we can were T shirts during day time. Walking in 15 minutes, I reached " Go Now Backpackers". To be honest, It was not clean and small. But there are two towers and (2024)

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hamuk

12 Jul 2023

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Yuruki

12 Jul 2023

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It wasn't cold even in winter, or we could say we could wear t-shirts during the day. After a 15 minute walk, I arrived at Go Now Backpackers. Honestly, it's not clean and it's small. But there are two towers, separate for men and women. It was easy to move around. I met a Japanese woman of my generation and it was easy to communicate. I felt at ease. After that, we went to Coles, a famous supermarket in Australia, and bought a "Yes Optus" SIM card for AUD$2. I was relieved to be able to use my cell phone.

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12 Jul 2023

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以下は英語（アメリカ）に関する質問です：
「私の日記をチェックして修正してください。

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そして、冬でも寒くなく、むしろTシャツを着るができると言えます。15分歩いて、「Go Now Backpackers」に到着しました。正直言って、それは清潔ではなく、小さかったです。しかし、女性と男性が分かれている2つのタワーがありました。行動しやすかったです。私は私と同世代の日本人女性に出会い、コミュニケーションがしやすかったです。安心感を感じました。その後、オーストラリアで有名なスーパーマーケットの1つであるColesに行き、「Yes Optus」の2ドルのSIMカードを手に入れました。私は自分の携帯電話を使えることに安心しました。」

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以下は修正後の文です。

「寒くない、いやむしろ冬でもTシャツを着ることができると言えます。15分歩いて、「Go Now Backpackers」に到着しました。正直に言うと、それは清潔ではなく、小さかったです。しかし、女性と男性が分かれている2つのタワーがありました。行動しやすかったです。私は私と同世代の日本人女性に出会い、コミュニケーションがしやすかったです。安心感を感じました。その後、オーストラリアで有名なスーパーマーケットの1つであるColesに行Yes Optus」の2ドルのSIMカードを手に入れました。私は自分の携帯電話を使えることに安心しました。」

この修正後の文では、文法的なミスや誤字脱字を修正し、より自然な表現になるようにしまた、一部の表現をより適切なものに変えています。例えば、「I was reliefed to use my phone.」は、「私は自分の携帯電話を使えることに安心しました。」と訳されます。

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Please check and correct my diary. ↓↓↓ And not cold, even in winter, or rather I could say we can were T shirts during day time. Walking in 15 minutes, I reached " Go Now Backpackers". To be honest, It was not clean and small. But there are two towers and (2024)

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